Hi Bloggers!! I am talking about my reading that i did today. today in reading I had to draw a window for the most significant event. I have been working with a story called treasure, and it was by Sarah black. It's about three lazy brothers called Mumbo, Jumbo and Gumbo all they did was watch movies, eat potato chips and burp. there was also a farmer who worked the farm but he passed away. To do this activity I had to imagine I was standing watching the most important event of the story. I was proud that I did all of my window in 7 mins or something like that. I think I should improve next time is to make my writing more neater so people can read it. Here is my Screenshot of my slide
Hi Dylan! I liked how you put the main characters straight away and they like eating potato chips. You brought me back when I was doing the same thing on paper but I messed up and I did it on computer. To improve you can tell other people to tell if your doing an poster or something else. Did you like the Mumbo,Gumbo and Jumbo story? From Sahil :)
ReplyDeleteHi Sahil thanks for the comment. I liked the Gumbo Mumbo Jumbo story because the kids were lazy. I was doing a poster. From Dylan at YMS
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